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20 different laughs
and 20 different faces
100 different thoughts
A millions different feelings
and "I" floats in the
-=middle=-
where no one can know
and nobody will see
just how (shallow) I am,
and how much I
(hate to) give up (anything)
to you
But my hatred is (just) fear of
what I might lose;
this hatred is afraid that
(a fearful thought;
"what will I get back")
my poor heart
(with it's reverberating pulse)
won't be able to keep up
(or return) with
(all) the love I've
(been) given
and I don't want to let you down
and I don't want to fail
and I don't want to miss
(a moment with)
you
and 20 different faces
100 different thoughts
A millions different feelings
and "I" floats in the
-=middle=-
where no one can know
and nobody will see
just how (shallow) I am,
and how much I
(hate to) give up (anything)
to you
But my hatred is (just) fear of
what I might lose;
this hatred is afraid that
(a fearful thought;
"what will I get back")
my poor heart
(with it's reverberating pulse)
won't be able to keep up
(or return) with
(all) the love I've
(been) given
and I don't want to let you down
and I don't want to fail
and I don't want to miss
(a moment with)
you
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ha ha!! thanks go to Kafteros-Okeanos for helping me w/ the title ^^
but the 2nd to last stanza isn't right... i know it's not right. but I haven't fixed it yet, I'd also like to hear any suggestions you have for that...
so yea... a guy at work told me i had like, 20 differents laughs, so that's the first line, and it just kinda grew from there... and by grow, i mean like a cancer; it's not necessarily a good thing : x
but yea, here we go...
but the 2nd to last stanza isn't right... i know it's not right. but I haven't fixed it yet, I'd also like to hear any suggestions you have for that...
so yea... a guy at work told me i had like, 20 differents laughs, so that's the first line, and it just kinda grew from there... and by grow, i mean like a cancer; it's not necessarily a good thing : x
but yea, here we go...
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This is great. The format is easy to read, flows well. It's sweet too.