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My head aches
          so I down a couple pills
                    with diet Cola-

               then I'm back to my chair
                              my TV
                         my game;

          It's going to be another long night
:iconelcyioncoire:
written around 10. I was actually watching Dodgeball w/ my dad & bro at the time, but *usually* i'm playing games by then : x unless i'm out & about, of course >.>


fucking ruts >.o


adv. crit. 'cause i write so infrequently these days : (
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:iconjokerfan001:
ahahahahah this SO DESCRIBES my friend XD s rutter.
her last name is rutter and shes very rutt-ish
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:iconcarebeararmy:
lol damn us and our ruts
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:iconlitvamp:
Mood: Love ~litvamp Apr 25, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
Don't feel bad hun everyone has a rut, i do when it comes to work. so buck up :)
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:iconelcyioncoire:
i'm tryin to ^.^;
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:iconlitvamp:
Mood: Joy ~litvamp Apr 26, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
lol
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:iconfluffiestninja:
I love the staggared line breaks. Few people realize that its how a poem looks as well as what it reads that matter. Loved it
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:iconfluffiestninja:
lol id say go ahead and post them

gotta be proud of your screw ups as well as your successes
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:iconelcyioncoire:
form & function work well when they work at all : D I've seen ((and written!)) some stuff that looked terrible. Of course, I've taken 'em outa my gallery or just never uploaded 'em at all, so hopefully the world will never know ;)
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:iconcolorfuldudzilla:
The way you write/type it looks awesome~ O3O;; dun change! </3
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